Well, since you are saying you had issues with it I could provide a critique?
Dash should be smaller than Gilda, her head should be the same size as Gilda's not bigger, her hair should lie slightly flatter, the shading on her eyelid should be lighter, her left foreleg is too skinny and short and the elbow is bending backwards, and her tail... you tried getting fancy with her tail... -_-
But the overall impact of the pic is quite nice... except I feel it's too touchy-feely for those 2.
You did well on capturing the emotions.
Dash should be smaller than Gilda, her head should be the same size as Gilda's not bigger, her hair should lie slightly flatter, the shading on her eyelid should be lighter, her left foreleg is too skinny and short and the elbow is bending backwards, and her tail... you tried getting fancy with her tail... -_-
But the overall impact of the pic is quite nice... except I feel it's too touchy-feely for those 2.