Your shading is quite phenomenal, and I would say its the beak that's you problem instead of the neck. Gilda's head may be turned down slightly, but her beak has too sleep of a slope on it, making it look disjointed. In spite of that it's still a great piece, I just hope you don't mind the critique.
"Attorney" as a word does not determine whether one is a prosecutor or for the defense, at least not in America or Japan, which are the settings for the Ace Attorney series. It's just another way of saying Lawyer.